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Spider-Man Movie by RAM

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Here is one that I complete in 2.5 hours pencils and inks in Manga Studio. I call it Spider-Man movie because I recorded this to show you the process on Youtube. You can watch it on my channel at MrRamstudios1 if you would like or just click here [link]. Let me know what you think of my drawing of the old web head as the great Stan Lee likes to call him.

Have a great one and as always....More to come!

This is Fan Art and is property of Marvel Comics created by Stan Lee.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Starting with the good, you have a good idea of body proportions and positioning. That part is very obvious and clear! You also have a good idea of perspective and using that to the advantage of the overall piece.

My only real problems:
The foreshortening of the arm, the hand might be angled just a bit to give it an easier transition between the wrist and the forearm.

The crotch area shouldn't be this flat. Men have a "package" and that should be given some definition. I'm not talking about giving him a porn pouch or a full-on boner but the flatness here is odd and distracting because your muscles are nicely done and given a good deal of weight by light and shadow. Rounding the crotch area to give it a bit of fullness would go along with the rest of the piece.

This last bit is something most ALL comic artists do.